eriandor's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Matt's Anime Tutorial]

weird

hey this is a very good tutorial but there are still some mistakes i'd like to point out(or if you'd care to explain why)
first, i know it's anime, but your chins are a little bit too pointy.
second, when following the mouth mini tut i noticed that the shade of your noses are rectangular while ur nose is a triangle like thing and i wondered HOW IN THE WORLD can a triangle cast of a square as a shade...
and third, the last pages of the body tut, you drew a man with a sword and the next page u shaded him but you did it extremely wrong.Not that the shading itself is wrong but it is coming from a lot of different directions(the light source i mean) and it becomese all messed up( i'll try to tell where: the blue jacket is lighted at the top and it is the most attractable thing of the drawing so it would seem that the light is abov e him, the pants seem to be ok but still it seems that the light comes from the right when u look at it, the collars of his shirt are lighted inwards, that would mean the light source is inside his chest?You tried to shade the head with a gradient but forgot something:THE HAIR. so assuming that you intended the light to come from above, there should be shade beneath the hair first.so the original drawing looks better)

it's a great tut for beginners though^_^

[The Tutorial Collab '06]

Maybe it could be ok

but it's TOO big, when u've read about 6 pages, it all starts lagging like hell and my pc freezes.I've read about others too who have had this problem. It even lagged when the title came on screen or something and that's really annoying, it almost looks like ur watching at 6fps

but it's probably very good i suppose^^

eriandor

[Dress yourself *webcam*]

that was very cool

but it has a lot of flaws. The screen was way too small compared to the face thingies u drew. And they were crappy too.I like the idea very much but you should've payed waaaay more attention to your artwork and graphics an perhaps your layout. Then it would get a way better score

but still fun

eriandor

Mechabloby responds:

I know. I'll fix all that in the next one. thanks for your review. :)

[The Basics (Tutorial)]

this is very very good

Yeah i like everything about it it's just well, i am busy on a tutorial also for a few weeks now. And u've said a lot of things i already said or wanted to say and my layout is waaaay crappier although i am covering more subjects (cause i don't like 1 subject tutorials like'how to make a button').I'm just wondering if I should continue my work or well let the world use this great tutorial?

DingoEatingFuzz responds:

Thanks on all of the compliments and I would say, go for it. Finish your tutorial, do your best and it may be amazing. It isn't really possible for it to get less recognition than this tutorial :(

[Xiao Xiao No. 6]

nice

damn i loved this ever since i had internet connection but all those idiots who can't figure out the smashy thing (little hint just keep hitting the middle one he'll walk right inderneath it) aaaaaaaah stupid stupid stupid

still rocks, all xiao xiao does

eriandor

[Short Circuit]

freaky

that was one cool game but the thing i liked most(beside the music) was the after effect=
when i died and opened the NG page again everything was like going up it seemed because i had been watching the stars all the time^^
sooooo cool